The Place Where It All Starts
I’m standing in the check-out line at the grocery, playing a little game. Maybe some of you have played it too. In front of me, there’s this guy–tall, dark hair, kind of muscular. Nice firm…umm, well you get the picture.
He’s working those biceps, lifting laundry detergent and milk jugs from the cart. Everything about him is laid open for all to see on the conveyor belt. Lots of pre-packaged meals and peanut butter, a loaf of multi-grain bread, sleeping tablets, manly deodorant, razor blades, and a bottle of wine–domestic white. Toilet paper, duct tape, soap and a case of bottled water.
Sean, (I went ahead and named him) pushes the cart through and pulls out a wad of crumpled bills and a ton of change from the pockets of his low-cut jeans.
He has just enough for the bagged items. Almost to the penny. He pushes the cart one-handed, through the automatic doors and out of my life.
Based on his purchases I can surmise quite a bit about Sean. He’s single, has bills the paycheck never stretches far enough to cover, has trouble sleeping because of the money troubles, can’t cook, likes to eat and drink healthy, but doesn’t have the time for it since he’s always on the go, works out and cleans up nice after. Keeps a bottle of wine around for his girlfriend or a potential girlfriend.
But would I be right? Would the jumble of items paint a different picture if I placed a few of them in a different order?
Let’s see…white wine, sleeping tablets, duct tape, razor blades. Sounds a bit more sinister now, doesn’t it? Is Sean hero or villain?
The cash came directly from his pocket, not out of a wallet. No bulge in those jeans–well, at least not in the back. (LOL!) So no wallet. Maybe no driver’s license or identification–he’s paying cash, so he doesn’t need it anyway. Is he driving without a license? Or did he walk. He must live close.
What about those seemingly harmless items he bought? Placed together, they form an odd window into his world and into the world of a writer.
Imagination. This is where it starts. We see something and make comparisons and attachments, sometimes leaping over mountains of logic. We choose the solutions that seem to fit best, based on our own perceptions.
For writers, this means we’ve seen, heard, smelled, tasted or touched something that triggered a connection–integrated the intangible with the possible. The result is a concept or premise for a story.
I’ve played the game all my life. It can be applied to a person, place or thing. The spark for inspiration needs only a little fuel. Curiosity and excitement will fan the rest.
The spark for my novella, Cup of Fate, started with a photo and a request for help. A member in one of my personal interest groups wanted to find out the meanings of the symbols painted inside an old heirloom teacup.
On further inspection, I realized she had a vintage fortune telling teacup. Some of the symbols were clear enough. The significance behind the baby carriage and wedding ring were self evident–but what of the other strange markings?
As I tried to decipher the cup, I began to play the “what if” game. An entire scenario popped into my head. What if…a woman, new to the area, went yard sale shopping and found this teacup. What if the old woman who sold it to her offered to read her fortune.
Sounds like fun, right?
Ah…but what if the tea cup didn’t foretell the future, but instead sent the poor soul who drank from the cup to an alternate reality, her destination all based on obscure drawings inside the cup–and exactly where those loose tea leaves chose to rest?
Keeping a creative journal organizes all the what ifs and other observations you make each day into a format you can return to again and again–your own hidden stash of gold nuggets. Writer’s block doesn’t stand a chance against such a valuable ally.
Dreams can also be a potent spark to imagination. H.P. Lovecraft suffered from terrible nightmares. Someone suggested he write them down in a journal. This enabled him to have at least some sense of control over the dreams. Better still, it allowed Lovecraft to write stories that have entertained millions of readers and inspired many of today’s top paranormal and horror authors.
Whether terrifying, highly erotic or laugh-out-loud funny, all dreams can be used to spark the creative juices.
If you have a blog, think back to some of the more memorable events you wrote about. See if there is a theme. Who knows, you just might have enough there to create your own nugget of a story idea.
Once you know how to look, you’ll find the place where your story starts. Even if it’s in the check-out lane of a grocery store.
Clean up on aisles two and three.
Now, I wonder what that’s about?




May 19th, 2008 at 12:05 pm
Oooooh this was a fantastic post! I love the way you slant stuff to show a different perspective!!
May 19th, 2008 at 8:11 pm
Glad you liked the post. Have you ever played the what if game at the grocery? I bet you will now, if you didn’t before.
Thanks for stopping by,
CC
May 19th, 2008 at 8:35 pm
Fantastic post!!!!!!
May 19th, 2008 at 10:28 pm
Great post, CC! I loved the two different images of the guy based on the ordering of the list. I need to play the “what if” game more often. One of my favorite things to do is to sit back in a crowd or group setting and people watch.
The description of how you came up with the premise for Cup of Fate. That’s one of the great things about creativity, you never know where the spark is going to come from. But you have to be ready to catch it and run with it.
-Kaige
May 21st, 2008 at 2:03 pm
I vote that Sean is a fantastically hot and sinister villain. Loved the post, CC!
May 22nd, 2008 at 12:20 am
loved this post
no looking for the empty check-out
shopping tomorrow after the gym
hope i have someone interesting in front of me
May 22nd, 2008 at 3:26 am
I used to love making up lives for the people on the ferry and the bus.
Life is so much less interesting when you drive your own car.
May 22nd, 2008 at 5:09 am
Oh my GAWD.
I have you on my Google Reader, but there’s just so much stuff to read.
*sobbith*
But I love this post. It’s so…so…WRITERLY.
If I don’t know better, I’d think you were a writer. Or a sooper sekret SPY.
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I, um, buy a lot of kleenex and mushrooms. And today I had the thought that if the world went into apocalypse, I would miss kleenex and handcream the most. If I survived the loss of water, that is.
Sweet dreams!
May 22nd, 2008 at 3:26 pm
I am always observing people myself. I’m glad I’m not the only one who does this. I used to carry around a character notebook and constantly take notes about what I saw. Now I try to do that mentally.
I buy a lot of fresh foods and have such good intentions- when I come home exhausted we eat out a lot and my good food dies!
Kissa:angry:
May 22nd, 2008 at 4:41 pm
awesome observations as usual
I love the way your mind works. Mine used to work like that then I had kids LOL I love the what if game!